We all agreed that Eleanor and Park was a quite wonderful book that
spoke of the joys and sorrows of first love. Several of us thought that
it was a bit too long - that there were some sections that, had they
been shorter, would not have negatively affected the total story. We
also agreed that young people - especially girls - would like reading
this book, since the things that happened were so real and the
relationship between Eleanor and Park developed slowly, by little bits
of connection, just as real relationships do at that age (and probably
at any age!). A couple of our writer members felt that it wasn't very
"writerly," although they liked the story and kept reading to see what
would happen next. Others felt it was beautifully written - especially
in the transitions between Eleanor's and Park's voices as the story
developed. We liked Park's very 'sensible' family and the obvious love
between his parents, and the way they dealt with him, which certainly
had an impact on his feelings for and actions toward Eleanor, and
provided a healthy contrast to Eleanor's completely dysfunctional family
which included her abusive stepfather and a mother who allowed the
abuse to continue. We also were content with the ending: that Eleanor
got to a safe, sane place with her uncle's family, and that Park learned
and grew from the total experience. We felt that the 'second' ending,
when Eleanor finally sent Park a post card with "three words" possibly
provided the opportunity for a sequel.
As for the picture book, If I Built a Car, we had mixed feelings. On one
hand, we felt that little kids who were interested in cars would love
it - especially boys. Some of us were completely put off by the
Seuss-like rhymes, which, although well-executed, rhythm and meter-wise,
seemed to go on for too long. We basically liked the illustrations
which showed the fantasy car the little boy had imagined, and felt that
the illustrations would have worked fine with a sparser text. We liked
the endpapers which showed the boy's plans for his super car. One of our
members thought the little boy looked a bit weird and creepy in the
illustrations, and several of us agreed. Some of us felt it would be a
good read-aloud, and could serve as an impetus for kids to imagine their
own perfect cars or planes or probably anything else.
WELCOME
WELCOME! For the last 19 years, about once a month, usually on a Thursday evening, a group of writers, illustrators, teachers and librarians meets in the Los Feliz area of Los Angeles to discuss children's books. Lately we have started meeting at lunch time, once every three months. Usually we talk about one picture book and one middle grade or YA novel. After the meeting, Sandy Schuckett, a retired LAUSD librarian, summarizes our discussion. Here are her reports of our thoughts about the books we have read. We'd love to have your comments too!
Thanks to Nancy Hayashi for our wonderful title art! NOTE: We are changing to a new schedule. Our meetings will now be quarterly and during the afternoon. Our group has been meeting since 2007. It was organized under the auspices of the Children's Literature Council of Southern California (CLCSC).
Thanks to Nancy Hayashi for our wonderful title art! NOTE: We are changing to a new schedule. Our meetings will now be quarterly and during the afternoon. Our group has been meeting since 2007. It was organized under the auspices of the Children's Literature Council of Southern California (CLCSC).
Thursday, August 15, 2013
Thursday, June 27, 2013
ICEFALL by Matthew Kirby and INFINITY AND ME by Kate Hosford
At our
last meeting we had stimulating discussions of both books. We were divided 4-4-1
on Icefall. Four of us loved it, four didn't, and one was ambivalent.
Those who loved it noted that they thought the writing was wonderful -- even
poetic; they liked the inclusion of Norse mythology; they loved how the story
showed the growth of the main character, Solveig, as she dealt with issues of
family, sibling rivalry, death, hunger, survival, love, and betrayal, and --
best of all -- they loved how the 'power of story' played such a signifant part
in the narrative. The others weren't so thrilled by the writing, wanted a more
realistic portrayal of Norse history, and didn't feel at all engaged by the
characters.
As for
the picture book, Infinity and Me, we also didn't have consensus. We
all agreed that it was a good way to attempt to explain the concept of infinity
to young readers, and we liked the author's notes at the end of the story. Some
of us felt the story was just OK, but didn't love the illustrations. People who
had read the book to young children reported that the children's reactions were
positive, so one could assume that that fact may be more important than what a
group of grown-up ladies thinks!
Thursday, May 9, 2013
THE ONE AND ONLY IVAN by Katherine Applegate and BIG MEAN MIKE by Michelle Knudsen
If we were
looking for a slam-dunk positive reaction to The One and Only Ivan, it didn’t happen.
We all agreed that the spare writing of this book was wonderful, even poetic,
and that the transitions from one thought to another in ‘Ivan’s’ mind were
perfect. A couple of our members just didn’t think the story rang true. One
person thought that ‘Ivan’ was too humanized…he was an ape – how could he think
like a human? Perhaps the author hadn’t done sufficient research into the
behavior of apes. But others felt that ‘Ivan’s’ thoughts exactly made sense –
especially since he had been raised by humans before being brought to the mall,
and the idea of ‘suspending disbelief’ made everything quite plausible. We
mostly all liked the minimalist little illustrations that were sparsely placed
throughout the story, and felt that they were terrific. We also thought this
would be a good book for reluctant readers, since the text was quite accessible,
and not too dense. We learned that sadly, the real Ivan died, at age
50, at Zoo Atlanta in August, 2012.
As for our
picture book, Big Mean Mike, everyone
pretty much loved it, although a couple of people thought it presented a bad
example for children: a bully being the hero. But others pointed out that ‘Mike’
never actually bullied anyone…he just presented that impression, and because of
that everyone was scared of him. It raised the issue of judging someone on their
outward appearance rather than their actions, and also the fact that a seemingly
‘rough’ person could easily have a soft spot…like ‘Mike’ did for the little
bunnies. We thought the illustrations by Scott Magoon were terrific, and matched up well with
the story.
Thursday, March 28, 2013
WORTH by A. La Faye and OLD ROBERT AND THE SEA-SILLY CATS by Barbara Joose
We started our discussion of Worth by agreeing that the
writing was quite good....a couple of our members thought it was brilliant. One
mentioned the terrific transitions that described Nate's thinking; another said
it was the first book that had made her cry in a long time. But -- as we talked
more, a couple of people weren't thrilled by the overuse of metaphors, and we
also wondered if kids reading the book would understand the conflict between the
ranchers and the farmers that played such a big part in Nate's and his family's
life. We liked the fact that his parents were 'normal' people: i.e., they
disagreed, they argued, but they loved their son and were each able to show him
that love in their own way. We also liked the way that Nate and John's
relationship developed as they grew to understand each other. It was a great
discussion!
We pretty much had positive feelings about the picture
book....except for a couple of details. One of our members thought that the
'silly cats' weren't really silly, but someone else pointed out that 'silly' to
a child might have a different meaning than it has for an adult. We thought it
was a great read-aloud because of the predictable phrases where children could
join in, and also a good bedtime story, and we liked the illustrations by Jan Jutte. We liked
the way that 'Old Robert,' the seaman who thought he 'had everything he needed'
came to realize that he really needed something to care for. We also thought it
should have ended a page earlier than it actually did.....the ending as
presented in the book seemed useless and unnecessary.
Thursday, February 21, 2013
CODE NAME VERITY by Elizabeth Wein and NOAH WEBSTER AND HIS WORDS by Jeri Chase Ferris
Even though our novel, Code Name Verity won a 2012 Michael Printz
Honor Award as well as a great deal of positive 'buzz,' we didn't particularly
love it. Most of us thought the writing was quite good, but we had a lot of
problems with many of the incidents that happened in the story. We couldn't
believe that a young girl imprisoned by the Gestapo would be given tons of paper
and asked to write. We also didn't get the distinction between the two young
women, and why the story of 'Maddie' was the main one that was told. We felt
that really smart young women who were serious readers would probably like this
book, and we liked the fact that it presented information about young women
performing heroic tasks during World War II. But -- with all of that -- we still
didn't love it!
The opposite was true with our picture book. We almost unanimously LOVED Noah Webster and His Words. We loved the writing, the inclusion of 'dictionary definitions' placed within the text, the great mixture of the art and the text, the humor, the depiction of Noah as a persistent person who never gave up on his dreams (because he was always right!!), and we marvelled at the amount of work he accomplished in his life...(for which we -- word lovers that we are -- truly thank him!) Only one of our members wasn't crazy about the book -- she didn't care for the illustrations, although she felt the text and the information presented were quite good. We also thought the 'back matter' was excellent -- the presentation of more facts about Noah Webster's life through a timeline of specific details and some additional text, plus a list of the author's sources.
Thursday, January 17, 2013
WONDER by R. J. Palacio, and ON THE NIGHT YOU WERE BORN by Nancy Tillman
We were a small but mighty group at our last meeting. We all agreed that
the
novel, WONDER by R.J. Palacio was -- indeed -- WONDER-ful! A couple of people had some concerns with minor plot points, but in general we all loved the way the writing and the voice rang true, the realistic portrayal of Augie and the
other kids as well as their middle school experiences, the sections by Augie's
sister Via and her boyfriend, the fact that it showed a healthy, 'normal,' loving family, and the excellent way it dealt with bullying and mistreatment of
people who are different for some reason without becoming preachy or didactic. We
all hope it will win the Newbery, which will be announced on Monday, January
28.
Regarding the picture book, ON THE NIGHT YOU WERE BORN,we all thought the illustrations were quite nice, but had a range of opinions on what I
learned is called a "lullaby book." Some of us felt it was a calming book to read to a young child before bed (maybe 'cause it would put them to sleep???)while others thought it was very sweet -- maybe too sweet -- maybe even treacly. We had
a great discussion about lullaby books and their purpose, and also about the
idea of kids today growing up thinking they are the greatest thing the world has ever seen.....slight differences of opinion on the true value of that as a child becomes a part of the real world. Definitely something to
ponder!
Wednesday, December 12, 2012
SON by Lois Lowry and ZEN SHORTS by Jon Muth
Our last meeting was small but
terrific. After a delicious dinner of Anne's famous Holiday Lasagna and tasty
sides and desserts brought by all we had a great discussion. For the first time
in recent memory, we all agreed on both books!
Re: Son, the Lois Lowery
book, we felt that although it was beautifully written, there was some
disconnect between the three 'worlds' the book portrays. None of us liked the
idea of the 'Trademaster,' and pretty much everything that happened after
'Claire' met him. Many felt that it was a definite 'mother' book, especially
knowing that Lowery had lost her own son in a terrible accident, and was maybe
trying to reconcile her feelings about that. We didn't feel that it really
'wrapped up' the story of The Giver as we had hoped it would. .....and
so it goes.
As for the picture book, Zen
Shorts, we also all agreed that although Muth's illustrations were quite
wonderful, the story (actually 4 stories) itself left a bit to be desired. We
thought the three 'fables' (the Zen Shorts) could have stood alone, and really
had little to do with the 'story' of the three siblings.....which we thought was
pretty weak. We weren't sure how much today's kids would actually 'get' the
fables, but we thought that being exposed to them was a good idea.
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